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How to Forget itHow to Forget it When it Happens By Josh EvansHow to Forget it
Hang up the phone. Be a man. Grab some cash and take a bus Down to a car rental place.
Get a car. Something nice. Something she’d like. Don’t let your mind drift too far off topic. Be a man. Make sure you pay the fifteen bucks For the extra insurance.
Go down to the grocery store And get at least a case of beer. Forget that beer is bitter and
Reeks of bad ideas. Forget that you swore it off. Be a man.
Wait for nightfall and coast up
To the ind
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Late One NightI am a vampire, so yes, I do drink blood. Does that mean I kill people? No, of course not. I only take a little. The blood bank takes more then I do. My stomach is not that big. People seem to think that a vampire can hold all of the blood that’s in a human body. If I did that I would explode. Where the hell would I put it? People have a lot of misconceptions of vampires.Late One Night
People also think we are satanic. I don’t even think the devil exists. I don’t believe in him. I don’t believe in God, angels, fai
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I am an Oscar Mayer WienerI am an Oscar Mayer wienerI am an Oscar Mayer Wiener
I have come to the profound realization that I hate most of the people on this planet. Actually this isn’t the profound part of my realization. I have hated most people for a long time. (Is my teen angst showing?) What has hit me only just recently is why. For the longest time I thought the reason me and the rest of humanity were at odds with each other was ideological. They liked riding in shitty euro’ed out cars and watching fucking American Idol, and I was into that whole reading and thinking thing. Silly me. But no. It has now come to my attenti
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- Favourite movie: Reservoir Dogs, Akira, Fight Club, and The Matrix
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- Skin of choice: Werewolf pelts
- Favourite game: Mage: The Ascension; Mario 3; Diablo II (in that order)
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taken from Silence is Golden.. thanks for your comment.. but i thought the last line would have some form of emphasis to the secret.. i guess you didn't think otherwise.. would you really think that it's a big secret if i hadn't put in the last line??
I do like your ablity to imply so much. good job.
taken from The Game.. thanks!! oh and i am thinking of doing an extension on that piece - like try to make it a little longer.. have you any idea on writing comedies??
plus adverbs suck anyway.
taken from Misplaced.. hahahaha, it took me awhile to understand the meaning of adverbs.. oh dear.. but yes, i will remember that adverbs suck, and try as best not to include them in my future pieces.. thanks for the comments..
great to see you around.. how have you been.. ???
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Okay, as for your question on "Silence is Golden:" I stick by my comment that you do not need the last line. The reader will still know that it's a big secret because the main character is thinking about it. She is only going to think about it if it impacts her life. The reader knows this. the reader also knows that if you, as the writer, are taking time to write it in, then it's important becasue you don't have much space or time to work with.
The real reason that you should take out the last line is not that its unnessary, which it is, but because it's unrealistic. Real people don't think of their own secrets as being " dark." That is you as the writer trying to interject more meaning that depth to make it sound cool, where you really can't. it just doesnt fit.
I hope that helps you. Once again, it is great to hear from you. I havent had a chance to talk to you in a while. It's good to see that you are alive and stuff.
Well I will see you around as well. Take care.
-Josh.
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